It’s odd. The Writing Group Homework process. Most fun I’ve had writing a story in a long, long, long time. The Stag was another, back at the start of the year. The first, and only other, of the writing tasks I was set by the group and completed. That one escaped my recent purge. I’ll have to post it at some point. I’ll get around to it in the next day or two…
I was looking over it again (Stuck In My Clothes, not The Stag) and I can pick out a few flaws, some mistakes that I’ll try and tighten up in the next attempt. Otherwise it seems to pass judgement. Don’t be afraid to let me know what you think though. Criticism is the name of the game after all. I won’t improve without it.
In saying that, and not to blow my own trumpet (but it’s always good to know you have a trumpet to blow, and that you have an open invitation to the brass section), but as a first draft in under 30 minutes I don’t think it’s too bad. I may have to dig through old e-mails and get previous homework I haven’t tried yet.